I think the concept is very nice here and the model fits it perfectly, especially with the hopeless expression in her eyes. I love that the image is black and white, which adds a lot to the overall mood. I feel however that the image could improve a lot through a better composition. If the model would be less on the left and a bit more to the middle, somewhere at the 2/3 of the image, it would look much more harmonic. Also a just a little change of the angle could make the model's eyes and expression more visible to the viewer and therefor show more emotion. Maybe it would also work better without the frame, or atleast with a smaller frame, because this one is distracting from the image I find, rather than adding to it. Overall very nice work.