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50 mm
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Mar 29, 2010, 12:56:37 AM

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From The Inside IV by ciplukk From The Inside IV by ciplukk
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I think the concept is very nice here and the model fits it perfectly, especially with the hopeless expression in her eyes.
I love that the image is black and white, which adds a lot to the overall mood.
I feel however that the image could improve a lot through a better composition. If the model would be less on the left and a bit more to the middle, somewhere at the 2/3 of the image, it would look much more harmonic. Also a just a little change of the angle could make the model's eyes and expression more visible to the viewer and therefor show more emotion.
Maybe it would also work better without the frame, or atleast with a smaller frame, because this one is distracting from the image I find, rather than adding to it.
Overall very nice work.
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AngieVX Featured By Owner May 16, 2010  Student General Artist
Gorgeous!
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HADI666 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010  Professional Photographer
:love::headbang:






ME MYSELF AND I [link]
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bosen Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
ouch, mantap gan :)
i love the empty space nya gan :) cukup berani :)
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klaic Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Beautiful shoot!
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buzadaniel Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010   Photographer
Great shot! :)
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ressa1205 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
mantaf cep...
do photolounge yak?
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nduttony Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010   Photographer
nice composition
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TakeMeUp Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
perfect photo. beautiful composition
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avogel57photos Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
cool, i really like the offbalance composition here =) oh...and she's gorgeous!
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Enter-Stinky Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
This is a truly beautiful photo, the contrast between her hair and the wall is especially catching, along with the lighting :) Very nice work :D
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